Here are a few corrections for you. "Actuality" should be "currently" The bank was converted into the museum building. Some of the items have more than 8,000 years of history. Instead of "formed for" it should be "made up of" Representation instead of represent "At first" should be "at the beginning of" Relics is a word we usually use for old religious things. A pack of cards is more an artifact, or you could say object. Also you last sentence about the fauna and animals is confusing. I think you are trying to say that they are old, so just say that they are X years old. You don't have to say that they have 800 years of history.
A general comment- your subtitles move really really fast! It's difficult to read!
Hello Fran,
ResponderEliminarHere are a few corrections for you.
"Actuality" should be "currently"
The bank was converted into the museum building.
Some of the items have more than 8,000 years of history.
Instead of "formed for" it should be "made up of"
Representation instead of represent
"At first" should be "at the beginning of"
Relics is a word we usually use for old religious things. A pack of cards is more an artifact, or you could say object.
Also you last sentence about the fauna and animals is confusing. I think you are trying to say that they are old, so just say that they are X years old. You don't have to say that they have 800 years of history.
A general comment- your subtitles move really really fast! It's difficult to read!
-Stephanie